the angel of my dreams

Well, one more try at writing a poem. Let me know what you think of it. Guys, please don’t ask me whether I wrote it for a girl or what. I don’t want to tell lies :) Jokes apart, it’s partly a writing exercise and partly from experience and partly fiction :)


Before I saw you
my eyes never saw anything beautiful
After I saw you
my mind never stopped thinking of you
Where did you come from
the angel of my dreams

Why was I at loss of words
when I was with you
never asking even your name
while all my life, I was waiting for you

Never knowing who you are
how am I going to find you
if it wasn’t a dream

If it was a dream
why don’t you come again
the angel of my dreams.


I realized, writing poems is very difficult than writing composition in general. Poetry needs a good vocabulary and ability to express thoughts clearly in a poetic form.

You can read my first try at writing a poem here: To life with gratitude

Hope you liked it. Thank you for reading.

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One Comment

  1. deepak
    Posted August 22, 2009 at 11:13 pm | Permalink

    Beautifull… Some of us can use in there love letters…

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